Above, the sun continued its relentless deluge of heat and
even as she stood there she felt her brow burning with its intensity. It had seemed to her like a tyrant of late,
unforgiving and overwhelming; demanding that everything it touched bow to it
and surrender absolutely. Everything
had.
But in the midst of the dried out land her nose detected the
scent of life. Just a hint of moisture
in the wind- the faintest whiff of green things. She knew rain was coming.
Like the dust bowl during the Great Depression. Very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteExactly what I was thinking of, glad it came through.
DeleteI love the deep descriptions and imagery. You should remember this post when you need to describe a villain, as your sun imagery is intense. We just got some rain in the night and it was soooo heavenly after a few weeks of sun.
ReplyDeleteI picked that up, too, Beverly. You made me feel like I was there! Thanks for stopping by the PPW blog today. :)
ReplyDelete~Debbie
Great imagery. I loved the last line! It popped out at me. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis is good!
ReplyDeleteFlash fiction is definitely something you're good at.
I'd take that rain right now, let alone in the harshness of that time.
ReplyDeleteYou've captured the scents perfectly. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery Bev. Also great use of the senses!
ReplyDeleteFantastic flash fiction - you *go* with your bad self:)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully written Beverly! Her nose knows more than most meteorologists!
ReplyDeleteJulie