tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post7351728477851799764..comments2023-10-20T10:51:08.657-04:00Comments on The Beveled Edge: AwakeBevimushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-10045104087225513332013-06-23T13:55:32.908-04:002013-06-23T13:55:32.908-04:00Excellent job describing her situation. I definite...Excellent job describing her situation. I definitely feel for her. Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17363611239865782087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-56940269499331895232013-06-22T18:56:29.533-04:002013-06-22T18:56:29.533-04:00I like that description of her brain as flypaper t...I like that description of her brain as flypaper too, as well as the rest of it. This is good stuff Bev. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-90133765975473847372013-06-22T14:23:32.962-04:002013-06-22T14:23:32.962-04:00This was incredibly effective. The scariest detail...This was incredibly effective. The scariest detail for me was that her head was itchy. Nicely done!Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-25984719175421925362013-06-22T12:25:00.194-04:002013-06-22T12:25:00.194-04:00This could easily be a much longer piece… how did ...This could easily be a much longer piece… how did she get there, and how does she get away? Very well done, a jab to the gut and then the needle…Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-57953904106019725742013-06-21T19:58:40.622-04:002013-06-21T19:58:40.622-04:00I really like the imagery in this. Nice work.I really like the imagery in this. Nice work.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-35140403575375075622013-06-21T03:51:39.840-04:002013-06-21T03:51:39.840-04:00Powerful, interesting to read it from her point of...Powerful, interesting to read it from her point of view. I feel sorry for her. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-28938818530463615312013-06-21T03:44:56.321-04:002013-06-21T03:44:56.321-04:00I loved loved love the image of her brain as flypa...I loved loved love the image of her brain as flypaper catching some of the words. Fabulous stuff<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-80609324800292553092013-06-20T22:52:56.254-04:002013-06-20T22:52:56.254-04:00Huh. We went to very similar places on this #frida...Huh. We went to very similar places on this #fridayflash, Bev. I wonder how that could have happened - and I sincerely hope this isn't too close to any recent experiences for you.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-75012185167821261912013-06-20T21:13:44.505-04:002013-06-20T21:13:44.505-04:00wonderful descriptions! Especially the last bit. N...wonderful descriptions! Especially the last bit. Needles indeed. Poor woman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-66586565242888250532013-06-20T13:22:35.893-04:002013-06-20T13:22:35.893-04:00Wow, this is really good.Wow, this is really good.krystal janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08982747799563029153noreply@blogger.com