tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post5735557301466612897..comments2023-10-20T10:51:08.657-04:00Comments on The Beveled Edge: The GoatBevimushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-7347461636244835582011-07-11T11:27:45.363-04:002011-07-11T11:27:45.363-04:00Thanks to @Wiswell, @revhappiness, @AidanFritz and...Thanks to @Wiswell, @revhappiness, @AidanFritz and @Xeroverse for your comments. Sounds like it came out better than I thought!<br />To answer Xero I hadn't planned on doing anything more with these characters when I wrote it but seeing as there is interest I will mull it over and see if anything else comes up. If it does, I promise to write it.<br />Thanks all!!Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-1417942261035689122011-07-11T04:15:24.011-04:002011-07-11T04:15:24.011-04:00An intriguing set up and an infuriating ending! ;)...An intriguing set up and an infuriating ending! ;) There's some good chemistry between these two.<br /><br />I normally try and refrain from asking this question, but... will there be any more? I wanna know! ;DJohn Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-83721482153908897862011-07-10T12:03:03.016-04:002011-07-10T12:03:03.016-04:00I liked the give-and-take of the dialogue between ...I liked the give-and-take of the dialogue between Dogel and Andriel.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-62264669113048724332011-07-09T14:02:53.028-04:002011-07-09T14:02:53.028-04:00I really enjoyed this piece. You did well at maki...I really enjoyed this piece. You did well at making me feel Dogel's tension right along with him. His sarcastic baaing made a great ending!Aaronhttp://www.mgideon.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-47304609052387588572011-07-08T20:57:45.892-04:002011-07-08T20:57:45.892-04:00A great scene you captured here, and I want to lea...A great scene you captured here, and I want to learn more about these characters and their situation. Nicely done.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-34256113804044432682011-07-08T16:58:25.812-04:002011-07-08T16:58:25.812-04:00For whatever reason, I enjoyed that half the story...For whatever reason, I enjoyed that half the story was just getting around to what Dogel might be worried about. Perfect ending for all of us who have been called old goats.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com