tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post3712040550802166312..comments2023-10-20T10:51:08.657-04:00Comments on The Beveled Edge: Things You Can’t Tell Just By Looking At HerBevimushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-66492587047943952352011-03-16T21:39:46.778-04:002011-03-16T21:39:46.778-04:00When I clicked the link to this story, I really di...When I clicked the link to this story, I really didn't expect what I got. I expected something more trivial and frivolous, and what I read was a bittersweet tale of a life built on love and loss. Beautiful and touching.Ragemorehttp://twitter.com/#!/CapriciousPithnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5575209851731621303.post-58756271257648838732011-02-17T23:18:02.579-05:002011-02-17T23:18:02.579-05:00Something appears more in this story than most of ...Something appears more in this story than most of your other fiction. The distinct details. "They’ve noticed the wedding ring, the earrings dangling from her wrinkled, elongated ear lobes." This sort of thing that evokes character. Stories don't necessarily need paragraphs of them, but they give flesh to fictional people as well as momentum and tone to prose.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com